2024届高考英语模拟卷应用文典例：活动类讲义素材.docxVIP

01探望空巢老人

keywords:人与社会；社区服务；空巢老人；活动意义

??昨天下午，你校学生会组织了探望社区空巢老人（emptynesters）的活动。请你给校英文广播站写一篇报道，内容包括：

1.活动时间和地点?????2.活动内容??????????3.活动意义

Heartwarmingvisit?to?empty?nesters?inthecommunity

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难点：一、被淹没在题海中的高中生没有社区服务的经历，想不出合适的活动项目；二、同样因缺乏体验，无法感同身受，活动意义不知怎么具体。

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Heartwarmingvisittoemptynestersinthecommunity

??Yesterdayafternoon?witnessed?ameaningfulactivityorganizedbyourStudents’Union.Somestudentsofourschool?broughtjoytotheelderly?whoareleftbehindaloneathome.

??Theactivity?washeldinthecommunityhall?wherethestudentsandtheelderlyallenjoyedeachother’scompany.?Tobeginwith,?thestudents?deliveredtheconcernandwarmth?totheelderly.?Then?they?gavewonderfulperformances?includingdancingandsinging.?Thefriendship?betweentheresidentsandthestudentswasbuilt.

??Theactivityturnedouttobeagreatsuccess,?leavingalastingimpressionon?boththestudentsandtheelderlyand?fosteringasenseofunityandcommunitycare.

02元旦登高迎新年

keywords:人与自我，活动报道，文化内涵

（2024南通一模）假如你是李华，2024年元旦你校举行了登高迎新年活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：

1.活动过程；?2.活动感想。

Climbingeventtocelebratethenewyear

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主要问题：一、设计活动过程时忽略了“登高”的文化象征意义，描写活动感想时缺乏亲身视角。二、语言表达苍白，缺少“氛围感”。

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linanticipationofagreatnewyear,/towelcomethenewyear

lincelebrationof...

lHavingabird’seyeviewoftheentireresort/splendid,wefeltourstressandanxietyfortheunknownfuturegivewaytoourexpectationsfor?thenewyear.

lWiththeintentionofreceivinggoodluckandwelcomingthenewyear,we